Thursday, May 17, 2007

this road - page one


beginning a short story that may or may not appear in "This Is How We Met"....no, his mind is blank...
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3 comments:

  1. Eric Merced6:10 AM

    Very good line contrast between foreground and background. And I like the gray tones. Looking good J.

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  2. Jamie Cosley11:04 AM

    Thanks! Stay tuned! This one is a little more in depth (compared to Sparrows) as I'm learning more and more about pacing and "the reveal"....

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  3. Kneon Transitt12:56 PM

    Ahh... Real Tony is back. :)

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