Thursday, May 17, 2007

this road - page one


beginning a short story that may or may not appear in "This Is How We Met"....no, his mind is blank...

3 comments:

Eric Merced said...

Very good line contrast between foreground and background. And I like the gray tones. Looking good J.

jamie cosley said...

Thanks! Stay tuned! This one is a little more in depth (compared to Sparrows) as I'm learning more and more about pacing and "the reveal"....

Kneon Transitt said...

Ahh... Real Tony is back. :)